Tuesday, November 29, 2011

My script

Here is the script for Redemption:

EXT.Day - Tilly's cafe


The son walks along the path and up to the cafe door.


INT.Day - Tilly's cafe


Son walks over and sits at the sofa. Meanwhile a waitress walks over to take his order.
SHANNON
Hi James, the usual?


James
Yeah thanks Shannon, put it on my tab.
Shannon walks off to get James’s order.


An senior man enters and limps over to the sofa.


Albert
Excuse me lad, may I take this seat?


James
Um, yeah sure, no problem


Albert comes to sit down.


Shannon returns with James’s coffee. She takes Albert's order.


Shannon
What will it be then sir?


Albert
Just a tea please young lady.


SHANNON
Coming right up.


Shannon walks away and quickly returns with a tea.


SHANNON
Two pounds please.


Albert looks in his pocket for cash.


ALBERT
Sorry love, I don't seem to have the cash.


James reaches across, five pounds in hand.


JAMES
Don't worry I've got this


ALBERT
Oh thank you, very much!


Jame's phone begins to ring.


JAMES
Hello...What do you mean you can't find him! I'm not paying you all that money to sit on your arse...I gave you all the information you need. My father’s name is ALBERT MATHEWS! Please, find him.


Father looks up.


James
Yes, I already told you. He left me...


ALBERT
18 Years ago.


FADE TO BLACK.

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