My letter to Miss Forrester

My letter to Miss Forrester, asking if I could miss enrichment to go and film in the perfect location:

Dear Mrs Forester,
I am writing to you to request your permission, for me to be excused form the second half of our enrichment lesson on Wednesday 30th, next week.
I will be working on my media production, I am afraid that this is the only feasible time we would be able to film due to the availability of set, cast and crew. Also we where unable to acquire the necessary set for any time apart from 2:30-4:00pm. There is no other afternoon in my timetable where I have two frees or a practical media lesson; which would be ideal for filming.
I would greatly appreciate it if you would excuse me for this period, being vital that I complete this media assignment as it heavily affects my overall AS grade.
And if necessary, I promise to catch up on my enrichment at a further date.
Yours Sincerely
Raja Hanna

The request was however rejected.